Feedback on First Spy Frag

Here it is (edit: don't know what the black border is all about, put that jawn on full screen)

I'm extremely sick and have been for a while, it forced me to drop out if high school. Because of this I usually am in bed all day on my laptop. I use TF2 as a mental distraction of the pain but I figured I could get better at editing videos while I'm like this. So if you have any suggestions, feedback or tips I would love to hear it. Also you could give me ideas to what to make my next video of... like which map to play spy on, or which class to do next! :D

InBefore's:
-Yes, I know I'm not the best spy
-Yes, I know I won't become Youtube Famous :p

I'll pass on that, been invited to 7 different highlander teams as spy but I don't want to play competitive at all. :I

Thanks! I'll definitely try some of that in the future. I've done some 360's before, like I said at the end of the video, everything was record from 2 hours. Glad the editing wasnt too terrible, only took me one hourish.

Smokey said:

MINE'S BETTER
GAMERTAG: sAsUke420xxbongpot720nocloak
PLEASE DON'T ADD ME FOR SPY TIPS THANKS

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Holy crap... good job man, that thing is hilarious :D

@Zombie-haha yeah that was a STAR impostor... some kids thought it was the real one tho. Thanks for the encouragement :D
@Ruelel-i got that Windows movie maker swag all ova dis vid dawg
@DanHeck, I'll make some more mountain lab videos soon :P Everything in the video was recorded during 2 hours on the server :(
@Pat- YO DAWG I HEARD YOU LIKED SLOW MOTION, SO I PUT SLOW MOTION IN TEH VIDEO DOE

Rvsz said:

Spies just love making pub frag movies.

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Ayo I'm just trying to have some fun, not about that competitive life tho

DanHack said:

Why do you do this to me.

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Hey on the bright side, you weren't one of my victims

Extended Cut:
Fooled around with different way of showing stuff, like fast forwarding slow action parts instead of skipping them completely like in the first one.
Also some fun stuff at the end.